G’s First Story

So today I asked G if he wanted me to write the story he was “writing”. As he can’t yet write he was scribbling on a piece of paper and describing the goings on that had just happened when he played with his figures.

He was absolutely ecstatic about it and I’ve read it to him multiple times now and we had storytime with Daddy after tea as well so he could hear it.

I’ve done punctuation as best I can, and at his request I put the right words in for the past tense because he’s still in that phase of language learning where he applies regular verb rules to all verbs.

Anyway, enjoy!

Level 1 – The New Battle
The encounter of the deep dark place. And what they have for army is candle throwers and fire men. And what they encountered, the big guy, was the Power Ranger and the big fist and the gun hand. And they encountered me with soldiers and a flick-rocker. And of course I had to encounter the red Power Ranger.

Level 2 – The Ever Hope
I re-encountered the leaping Power Ranger and we were in a big space about the size of a big cave and most of my soldiers are dead. I needed to have life, but I found a person to put out to kill zombies. But there was only one person and he killed one because he only had bullets. But then I found somebody to get him to make a big cannon. We will grow our men today. But now we shall be big to make my own fire bullets machine. And we shall do the biggest army ever against zombies ever to be seen. We shall kill the zombies because we have that machine.

Level 3 – The Army of Us
He didn’t encounter me first on level 3 because he didn’t want to be dead. He knew he would be dead. We are going to encounter his army for the dead against humans ever to be encountered ever. Zombies ever. They were too strong and we were sad because we weren’t the first ones to kill zombies. But I ran away. I would go back to the camp and see what it’s like to be dead because there would definitely be zombies there. There’s a big fortress so there will be lots of them so we will bring our big bullet machine and kill them. I killed the gun hand Power Ranger with the bullet machine and I bowed after.

Level 4 – The Army of Zombies
And we destroyed all the zombies finally, but there was only me left and I was so sad. Then I heard something, the sound of treasure. Then I found someone with treasure, with marble treasure, and we played marbles. Two each. We had a happy time, but then zombies came and my friend shot one but he died and I ran away. I found another friend and we went to that bullet machine to get protected because it’s the safest place because it can kill zombies to death. Then they bombed them. There was zombies coming but we killed them with the bullet machine. Then he ran away and I said, “Wait!” and then I ran to him because he was my only friend left because I knew he was the only one living. But he didn’t want to be with me. I put his marbles in a bag and he drove away and went home. And then his mum and dad were zombies and he died and then I killed the zombies and I was the only one living.